Reviewer’s Name Taurien wiggins Writer’s Name Danesha Glenn PEER EDITING/REVISION WORKSHEET FOR EXPOSITORY ENTRIESEntry Number __1___ Entry Title HonestyEDITOR’S COMMENTS:1. Statement explains the topic that the writer is going to discuss. YES Write the topic here. The topic is about why honesty is important2. Reason explains why the topic is important. YES 3. Example #1 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES 4. Explanation #1 ties example #1 back to the statement and reason. YES How? When she gave a explanation, she back it up with a strong example.5. Example #2 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES 6. Explanation #2 ties example #2 back to the statement and reason. YES How? Again, when she gave an explanation, she back it up with a heavy example.7. "What Difference Does it Make?" wraps up the entire entry byproviding a "big picture" view of why what writer said is important. YES 8. Writer uses vocabulary relevant to detective fiction. YES9. I circled punctuation, mechanical, and structural errors. YES10. I conferenced with the writer about his/her entry. YES Return this form to the writer so that s/he can attach it to his/her rough drafts.WRITER’S COMMENTS:1. The editor’s comments were helpful to me. YES 2. I understood what the editor wanted me to do. YES 3. I feel confident that I can make the necessary revisions. YES 4. At my next conference with the teacher, I need to discuss or ask about the following: